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SAW BBW 1: Is A Stick Truly Healthier Than Someone Obese?


“Hello Janice. I want to play a game,” were the words that woke me up. I yawned and looked around, as all I saw around me was a room that reminded me of a dungeon. I then turned to look where the voice was coming from. It was coming from nowhere.

Were there speakers on the ceiling? As soon as I looked up to check I saw the projector on the ceiling, which flickered a light that casted onto the wall in front of me.

On the screen was a man in a dark brown hood, the hood over his face so I couldn’t see any of his face at all, just a shadow. Scratch that – I saw glowing red eyes coming from the darkness in the hood. I wasn’t scared. It was just some Hollywood movie effects. Right?

He continued to speak, “You, Janice, have been self-centered enough in your life to starve yourself. You starve yourself to keep a thin figure, so people won’t judge you of your size. You may think being thin is healthy, but sometimes being too thin is the equivalent to being immortally obese. There is a massive trap door underneath where you’re sitting as we speak. The trap door shall only open when the maximum of one ton has been placed on it. You have, if you’ve not noticed, been chained by your wrists-,”

In fact, I hadn’t noticed. Now that he had spoken of it, I looked down at each of my wrists, which were held by metal brackets that were chained to the ground, the chain being about three feet long.

“- to make sure you keep still and don’t run out. There is also a pipe next to you. At the end of this video recording I want you to immediately stick that pipe into your mouth, and prepare for something to come out of it. Keep this pipe in your mouth at all times, for it will be your key to opening the trap door underneath you before the poisonous gas kills you. The gas will also start as soon as this video recording is over. And it shall be over in three… two…” and then the projection went black. Obeying these orders, mostly because I was frightened for my life, I quickly found the rubber pipe that was laying at me, as it seemed to lead to the ceiling.

I stuck the rubber pipe in my mouth as a blast of horrific flavors threw into my mouth at such a speed that I had to swallow. It both smelt and tasted like month-dead fish, rotten eggs, and various types of stuff you’d find in your local dumpster.

I was so tempted to just the tube out of my mouth right now, until I remembered the strange figure saying, “Keep this pipe in your mouth at all times, for it will be your key to opening the trap door underneath you before the poisonous gas kills you.”

I wondered what this horrid tasting stuff was going to do, when I looked down at my belly, as it grew into a slice of chub, and before then I could see my lungs from the outside. I also saw my breasts grow bigger, which I guess was a good thing since I had no tits before, or ass, for I have to mention do to the fact that I saw my thighs grow wider in my pajama pants, and rubbed by bottom, and it was soft and tempting to grab, as before it was just bone.

Plus, the pain. Oh, the pain. Have you ever gained ten pounds in only a matter of a minute? It hurts like shit, I’ll tell you that. This was just hell. I’m being forced to swallow the most gruesome tasting stuff in the world, while becoming the very thing I despise, and, as a bonus, a hell lot of pain and toxic gas!

After a good two minutes my belly hung out of my pajama shirt, jiggling with every movement, as well as my tits, that were now each as big as my head. My ass was round, and was partly hanging out of my pajama bottoms with its jiggling glory.  
I watched as my legs and thighs bulged and pressed against my pajama pants. It didn’t take long for my thighs and legs to break through. And all I did was just sit there, toxins in the air, a tube in my mouth as my body was expanding at an alarming rate.

My stomach started to hurt as I realized that I was consuming far too much that I could handle, which doubled my internal pain that I was feeling… Until…

The taste of what I was consuming changed; from rotten fish and eggs to the taste of sweet chocolate cake with sugary icing and the smooth creaminess of ice cream. And my hurting stomach had also grown extraordinarily hungry, as all I could think about food, and my size…

I chugged down the sweet taste faster and faster, as the sweet taste had seemed to come faster as I wanted it to. My shirt ripped off as long as the rest of my pajama pants, as I watched my wide legs grow wider, my jiggling belly grow farther down my wide legs, and my round breasts getting bigger and rounder as they pressed on against my bra. And my ass. I looked back and I could see it clearly! How far back was the end of my large ass? About seven inches I’d say!

Yes, the pain yet continued because of how fast I was expanding, and made me even sweat some, but I barely felt the pain because my hunger was my biggest priority and the biggest thing I was feeling right now was as well my hunger.

I’d take the pipe out of my mouth and yell “Make it go faster!” or something, but I was so hungry a second without food in my mouth would kill me. So, I inhaled to see if the substance would come out faster. It did. I was glad because I needed it so I could try to fill me up, even though something in it was making me even hungrier than before…

I watched as my flabby stomach turned into layers, my thighs and legs thickening as well as my arms and cheeks. I felt myself rise as well, probably because my ass was getting bigger and made me sit up higher.

I continued to witness my expansion as my stomach grew farther out, the flab piling onto the ground and my wide thighs as they continued to expand never ending, as well as my breasts that grew rounder and grew wider and wider and firmer, as well as my ass, as its monstrous self continued to grow out behind me, every time I even touched my ass it would jiggle and ripple everywhere.

The taste change from sweet ice-cream and cake and quickly turned into pure chocolate taste. So chocolaty it started not to even taste like chocolate, you know what I mean?

It seemed the chocolate was doing more to my body than the ice-cream and cake flavored stuff, because I was expanding at twice as fast, which was a very alarming rate.

I looked down as I saw my stomach block up all my vision from the rest of my body, except for my boobs, which were each the size of three watermelons, and my ass, that was even bigger than like twenty watermelons each.

Then I asked myself, ‘How have I not reached a ton yet?’ in my head.
As soon as I thought that, the trap door below me dropped as I felt my giant ass land on the cold, damp floor below as I looked around, spotting that I was in a pitch-black room and could still feel the pipe in my mouth that miraculously stretched down thru the trap door that was now shut above me, only with a hole that was probably being taken space by the pipe.

When I had just got used to the darkness, a bright white screen popped from in front of me, coming from another projector that was above me. The wall was farther away than I thought. About twenty yards. Plus the fall was higher than I thought. Probably my butt cushioned me from telling how high it was from pain.

On the white screen came the same face from before, with the glowing red eyes, as he said, “You passed your first level of the game, and now it’s time for your second.”
This had taken much longer than it should have, but here it is: SAW BBW.
Yes, I know, you weren't probably getting grossed out like you do when you see the real SAW movies, you might have even been masturbating to this, but another persons heaven is one's hell (for the protagonist in this story).
Part two, hopefully, will be coming out before the end of this month, but I'm trying as well to get another POV, Selling Your Soul, and a short story as well! So I'm not sure.
Hope you enjoy! Comment if you can :D
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Stephen1919 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
"The trap door shall only open when the maximum of one ton has been placed on it." This sounds strange, it should have opened immediately, as she is under a ton. Didn't you mean minimum, instead of maximum? (as she needed to reach a weight of one ton, the trapdoor to open)
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i-like-pie-so-much-2 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Would love for this for this to happen to me! :D
Great story. I loved it. (best boner I ever had :3)
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Ami-Chan015 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
Oh my god! Oh my god! One of the best wgs I've ever
read! Please. Please. Please make a sequel!
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3000x Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
try reading this with the SAW them plaing on you tube it acholee works relly well
p.s. good job on this
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steve-aka Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2009
Congratulations, this is well done. I can tell you took longer on this than your others. The sentence structures flow a lot smoother and has better transitions. Nice job!

However, I just gotta ask, when the trap door opened and she fell into the the next chamber below, what happened to the chains around her wrists?
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WeightGainersUnite Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2009
Oh, when I brainstormed this story I had meant to say that her weight was so massive that when she fell, the chains ripped off the floor above because of so much weight that was being pulled against it, but apparently I had forgotten that important detail, so I'm going to have to edit the text.
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steve-aka Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2009
Thank god for the text editing feature here on DA! One of the few advantages we writers have over the illustrators.
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WeightGainersUnite Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2009
Yes indeed, and what a great advantage it is.
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steve-aka Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2009
Amen, brother!
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aklwn Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2009
I can't wait for the next chapter! This is brilliant, and it pains me to wait to see what you have thought of next! Watch!
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